Floppy's book criticism

My sister is writing a book. Here's my "constructive" criticism for it:
1. She didn't change our last name- she's trying to make it sound all ordinary but not many ppl have the same last name as us.
2. It sort of sounds like an adult's writing it-which isn't bad-except for the fact that it doesnt sound like its coming from the heart of the child.
3. So far it seems like there's not gonna be much suspense, thrill, action, or real problem. It just sounds like every other extremely boring kids' book with stuff like "I have a problem-this bully at school takes my lunch money"-or friends fighting or a bad teacher- or for the slutty overgrown middle schooler books- "I don't have a boyfriend or I can't find the right makeup." So yeah I really don't see how there's going to be a real conflict.
4. There's not much creativity infused in it, especially since it seems to be solely based on the author's life. Now I will read a memoir if you make it interesting. But it's really not interesting.

As far as the pros, it was fairly well written for someone of her age.
-to Floppy, you must not get upset at me for saying this. If you're really going to try to publish it, you have to be able to take criticism-potential publishers will probably be a lot tougher then me.

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Very Hilarious Very True

This is just so true and quite funny.
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Very Funny

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Really Good Song

Alright I dunno if youve heard of them but there is this quite amazing grunge band called Temple of the Dog, which was, from what I understand, some sort of temporary merger of Pearl Jam and Soundgarden in honor of a deceased friend. Anyway they are amazing. Two of my favorite songs by them are Four Walled World and Pushin Forward Back. I suggest that you listen to them they really are a great band. Just keep in mind that they have a heavy sound (I always get screamed at for playing hard songs "loud") Look them up on youtube, or look up Lekter, who posts videos of a lot of their songs. If you like it and would like to find more music like them Id suggest joining Pandora or listening to Pearl Jam or Soundgarden.

Happy Fourth of July!

Yeah you read the title.Today is the anniversary of our independence. As you can see I made some changes to the blog. I changed it from that fire thing, just to make it a bit less extreme and a little more colorful. Additionally I love that picture that is now my background. I also loved the fire picture though.Floppy please comment on my changes

July 1st-Already????

Come on why does summer have to go so fast? I remember my last day of school, June 17. I remember my friend coming over and painting my nails that dark sapphire blue color that matches my eyes, and then we went to Olive Garden. Hmm.......time goes by so fast. If you think about, it time is really amazing.Well I'll let you think about it. Floppy, stop weirding or I am going to post what weirding is.

Rant #1-Or is it number 15 million

I hate when you go on a music site and on the artist list it says a bunch 0f crappy people like Lady Gaga and well you get the idea. You might as well make a separate list for people/creatures like Lady Gaga titled Computers. They are NOT artists, I am not even sure if they are human. Okay thats it for Rant #1, surprisingly it betrays its name and was barely even a rant.