Posted by Melissa at 11/27/2010 07:37:00 PM
Posted by Melissa at 11/27/2010 06:39:00 PM
alright for most of whts important just read the title also we're goin to trader joes tomorrow and im totally stealing stevia extract and organic sugar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Melissa Saturday, November 20, 2010 at 11/20/2010 06:19:00 PM
Really only one person is participating in it-me. I usually play pretty cool songs though- which is enough for me
Posted by Melissa Monday, September 27, 2010 at 9/27/2010 08:33:00 PM
My sister is writing a book. Here's my "constructive" criticism for it:
1. She didn't change our last name- she's trying to make it sound all ordinary but not many ppl have the same last name as us.
2. It sort of sounds like an adult's writing it-which isn't bad-except for the fact that it doesnt sound like its coming from the heart of the child.
3. So far it seems like there's not gonna be much suspense, thrill, action, or real problem. It just sounds like every other extremely boring kids' book with stuff like "I have a problem-this bully at school takes my lunch money"-or friends fighting or a bad teacher- or for the slutty overgrown middle schooler books- "I don't have a boyfriend or I can't find the right makeup." So yeah I really don't see how there's going to be a real conflict.
4. There's not much creativity infused in it, especially since it seems to be solely based on the author's life. Now I will read a memoir if you make it interesting. But it's really not interesting.
As far as the pros, it was fairly well written for someone of her age.
-to Floppy, you must not get upset at me for saying this. If you're really going to try to publish it, you have to be able to take criticism-potential publishers will probably be a lot tougher then me.
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Posted by Melissa Thursday, July 15, 2010 at 7/15/2010 03:50:00 PM
This is just so true and quite funny.
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Posted by Melissa Wednesday, July 7, 2010 at 7/07/2010 07:19:00 PM
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pee, piddle, urine, weewee, water
body waste, excrement, excreta, excretory product, excretion - waste matter (as urine or sweat but especially feces) discharged from the body
2. piss - informal terms for urination; "he took a pee"
peeing, pissing, pee
dirty word, vulgarism, obscenity, smut, filth - an offensive or indecent word or phrase
micturition, urination - the discharge of urine
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urinate - pass after the manner of urine; "The sick men urinated blood"
wet - make one's bed or clothes wet by urinating; "This eight year old boy still wets his bed"
stale - urinate, of cattle and horses
egest, excrete, eliminate, pass - eliminate from the body; "Pass a kidney stone"
ca-ca, crap, defecate, take a crap, take a shit, shit, stool, make - have a bowel movement; "The dog had made in the flower beds"