About The New Author- Bella

Well, I'm Bella, the new author here at the Some Stuff/Rants blog. I also run the Random List Blog, if anyone cares. I find it kind of cool to have a blog, since you can just (virtually!) jot down your ideas on a certain topic or on any random topic. I'm out of thoughts, so this is it. -Anonymous Oh So Mysterious One syas: Im the original one-and the more interesting one on this blog

More Remarkable Pictures III

A pretty fish at the NY Aquarium.

 A jellyfish jumping for joy.

The crowds at Brighton Beach, NY on a sunny summer day.

More Remarkable Pictures II

A fish at the New York Aquarium in Coney Island, Brooklyn.

A flourescent fish at the New York Aquarium.

A fish strolling by at the NY Aquarium.

A school of fish at the NY Aquarium.

Pictures I Took (More Remarkable Ones)

         The view of the famous Statue of Liberty from a Staten Island Ferry boat.

Flowers in front of our house in Brooklyn,NY.

A jellyfish at the New York Aquarium in Coney Island, Brooklyn.

A fish at the New York Aquarium.

These pictures prove there is some beauty in the urban metropolis of Brooklyn, NY.

Another Private Indie Fest Tonight

alright for most of whts important just read the title also we're goin to trader joes tomorrow and im totally stealing stevia extract and organic sugar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Private Indie Fest Tonight!!!

Really only one person is participating in it-me. I usually play pretty cool songs though- which is enough for me

Floppy's book criticism

My sister is writing a book. Here's my "constructive" criticism for it:
1. She didn't change our last name- she's trying to make it sound all ordinary but not many ppl have the same last name as us.
2. It sort of sounds like an adult's writing it-which isn't bad-except for the fact that it doesnt sound like its coming from the heart of the child.
3. So far it seems like there's not gonna be much suspense, thrill, action, or real problem. It just sounds like every other extremely boring kids' book with stuff like "I have a problem-this bully at school takes my lunch money"-or friends fighting or a bad teacher- or for the slutty overgrown middle schooler books- "I don't have a boyfriend or I can't find the right makeup." So yeah I really don't see how there's going to be a real conflict.
4. There's not much creativity infused in it, especially since it seems to be solely based on the author's life. Now I will read a memoir if you make it interesting. But it's really not interesting.

As far as the pros, it was fairly well written for someone of her age.
-to Floppy, you must not get upset at me for saying this. If you're really going to try to publish it, you have to be able to take criticism-potential publishers will probably be a lot tougher then me.

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